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Denialism present in article

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It seems that there is some Nakba denial present in this article which does not belong.

Specifically:

1. At the beginning of a paragraph about depopulated Palestinian settlements, there is the sentence: "Yoav Gelber wrote that the Arab Liberation Army embarked on a systematic evacuation of non-combatants from several frontier villages in order to turn them into military strongholds." This is WP:FRINGE and undue for inclusion. Gelber is an Old Historian (in contrast with the New Historians and of the work cited, Palestine 1948: War, Escape, and the Emergence of the Palestinian Refugee Problem (2001/2006[2nd edition]), I looked for reviews and found one [here https://www-cambridge-org.wikipedialibrary.idm.oclc.org/core/services/aop-cambridge-core/content/view/16849DA444A9A17EF768C33919FE897C/stamped-S0020743802004075a.pdf/yoav-gelber-palestine-1948-war-escape-and-the-emergence-of-the-palestinian-refugee-problem-portland-ore-sussex-academic-press-2001-pp-410-dollar7950-cloth.pdf] which is quite critical of the work, stating that "Palestine 1948 is a book to be examined by scholars of the period with interest but to be used, if at all, by those who are unfamiliar with the subject with extreme caution." (emphasis mine), that it is "of use to scholars who can evaluate it against other materials. Still, the reader must beware. Gelber's approach to history does not usually allow for discussion of the revisionist views he rejects.", and that "Gelber argues the nationalist version of Israeli history of 1948". If there are no other reliable sources to support the statement that "Arab Liberation Army embarked on a systematic evacuation of non-combatants from several frontier villages in order to turn them into military strongholds." then we oughtn't include it, per WP:FRINGE.

2. In a paragraph describing that "the events of the Nakba were by that point [that is, by the year 2010] "widely described" as involving ethnic cleansing", there follows that "Not all historians accept this characterization. Efraim Karsh is among the few historians who still consider that most of the Arabs who fled left of their own accord or were pressured to leave by their fellow Arabs, despite Israeli attempts to convince them to stay." The ideas here cited to Karsh are plain denialism. We should be presenting these views only in the context of Nakba denial or not presenting them at all per WP:FRINGE: "A Wikipedia article should not make a fringe theory appear more notable or more widely accepted than it is. [...] If discussed in an article about a mainstream idea, a theory that is not broadly supported by scholarship in its field must not be given undue weight."

3. The lead paragraph beginning "The causes of the 1948 Palestinian exodus are also a subject of fundamental disagreement among historians." needs to be altered significantly. For one, there only has been legitimate debate among historians, but today there no longer is. Second, the denialist factors listed should be removed, and indeed the inline citations supporting the dubious causes are quite weak here - "disinclination to live under Jewish control" is cited inline to two books which are not even about the 1948 war, and "Arab evacuation orders" is a known myth with its inline citation to Pittsburgh Press May 1948 (terrible source) and to a proper academic work which I can't access but which I can see includes as a footnote "In 1960–61 Walid Khalidi also investigated the BBC and FBIS radio transcripts recorded throughout the 1948 war to look for evidence of Arab evacuation orders but was unable to locate any at all.". This paragraph should be rewritten to state there is significant public and political debate, and should mention Nakba denial as that is cleary for for the lead anyway, but it should not give the impression that there isn't consensus in present day scholarship about the causes of the 1948 Palestinian expulsion. This lead paragraph also does not reflect the body as the dubious causes presented are (rightfully) not covered in the article. (Also note that the page causes of the 1948 Palestinian expulsion and flight is itself very poorly written and replete with denialism and "Old History" and is not to be used as a source).

-IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 19:31, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I disagree with your assessment. Regarding your first point, the review criticised Gelber's book for omitting various important aspects of the conflict, but not for inaccuracies
It's a normal scholarly discussion. The reviewer believes that the book provides an incomplete picture of the events and suggests that it shouldn't be the only book an uninformed reader should read about this topic. This is irrelevant for this article which uses multiple books by New Historians and others as sources.
I'll respond to the other points later. Alaexis¿question? 21:04, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"not for inaccuracies"? - "No work by an Arab scholar in Arabic is cited, because, as noted, Arab scholars have not been interested in the subject in a serious historical manner.[Summarising/describing Gelber's view] Anyone who peruses the bibliography of Eugene Rogan and Avi Shalim's edited volume The War for Palestine: Rewriting the History of 1948 (Cambridge, 2001) will see how false Gelber's assertion is." IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 22:02, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The assertion he deems false is "Arab scholars have not been interested in the subject in a serious historical manner". How is it related to the way Gelber's book is used here? Alaexis¿question? 14:36, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I see you've restored [1] "Yoav Gelber wrote that the Arab Liberation Army embarked on a systematic evacuation of non-combatants from several frontier villages in order to turn them into military strongholds.[1]" stating only "no arguments have been presented why this statement is untrue".
Since we have an RS which cautions against the use of this work of Gelber, stating it is "of use to scholars who can evaluate it against other materials", and since this material is given such prominence at the beginning of a paragraph about the depopulation of Palestinian villages, I think it is reasonable to ask for another RS that can corroborate this claim of Gelber's. Especially since the claim resembles (and may even be) the myth that Arab evacuation orders were a significant cause of the exodus. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 02:22, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, otherwise WP:ONUS (no consensus for usage, per discussions here) and WP:WEIGHT (single source, and Gelber as a primary source for his own views) apply – there are your arguments. Iskandar323 (talk) 06:32, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Gelber's claim has been corroborated by Benny Morris in "The Birth of the Palestinian Refugee Problem Revisited". On page 175, he points out how in April 1948,
the ALA ordered the inhabitants of Fureidis, south of Haifa, to evacuate their women and children, ‘and make ready to evacuate [the village] completely’. A few kilometres to the north, the women and children of Tira were evacuated with the help of the Arab Legion to Neuherrdorf, near Haifa, and later to Jordan. Similarly, dependents had been evac- uated from Khirbet as Sarkas, near Hadera (to Baqa al Gharbiya and Jatt). The women and children of Qannir were evacuated starting 22 April on ‘orders from on high’. In early May, Umm al Zinat was reported empty of women and children. North of Haifa, Kabri was completely evacuated. A few days earlier, the Arab communities around Rosh Pina, in Eastern Galilee, were ordered to evacuate their women and children, the men staying to guard the sites.
He continues to document the many examples of evacuations on Arab orders on p.176-178. Amayorov (talk) 18:06, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Assume this is all true, how many persons are we talking about? Selfstudier (talk) 18:08, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It's hard to tell, but Morris says that "all villagers in the Nazareth area", "all the villages between Haifa and Tel Aviv", Coastal Plain villages, neighborhoods bordering the Jewish areas in Jerusalem, were depopulated on orders from the general Arab headquarters or ALA. There was also apparently an evacuation order to Arabs living along the Palestine-Syrian border.
Here are some of the examples he gives: Shu'fat, Beit Hanina, al Jib, Judeira, Bir Nabala, Rafat, Dahi, Nein, Tampra, Kafr Misr, al Tira, Taiyiba, Na'ura, Nuqeib, ‘Arab al Satariyya, Beit Dajan, Kafr Manda, Majd al Kurum, Dimra, 'Illut, ‘Arab Mazarib, ‘Arab Sa‘ida, Ma’lul, Mujeidil, Beisan, Qastal, Qalandiya, some Jerusalem neighborhoods (Sheikh Jarrah, Wadi Joz, Musrara, Qatamon, Musara, Beit Hanina and others), Ma'dhar, Hadatha, 'Ulam, Sirin. Amayorov (talk) 18:49, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
So Morris only corroborates that some villages sent their women and children away (a sensible precaution in hindsight) and stayed on to watch over/guard their property. That is quite a different nuance from Gelber's "military strongholds" – without even asking how turning a rural village into a "stronghold" is even achieved. Iskandar323 (talk) 18:51, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Oftentimes, such as in Ma'lul and Mujeidil, the ALA ordered evacuation "apparently to make room for incoming ALA contingents and in preparation for anticipated offensive operations." In other places, such as in Beit Dajan, the inhabitants left at the same time as armed irregulars moved in. Morris gives other examples too. So there is, indeed, evidence in support of Gelber's claims. Amayorov (talk) 19:00, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Be careful that you don't confuse assertions by Morris with "evidence" – even Morris uses caveats like "apparently" when he writes. Iskandar323 (talk) 19:38, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'm simply responding to a above request for further corroboration:
I think it is reasonable to ask for another RS that can corroborate this claim of Gelber's.
Amayorov (talk) 19:46, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
And I'm merely cautioning on the use of the term "evidence", and the dangers of being loose-lipped with it. Corroborating statements are just those. Iskandar323 (talk) 19:50, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
1. Perhaps this could be modified based on Morris 2004? His gives a somewhat more balanced view on this. There is no evidence that the Arab states and the AHC wanted a mass exodus or issued blanket orders or appeals to flee. At the same time, the AHC and the Arab states often encouraged villagers (and, in some places, townspeople) to send their women, children and old people out of harm’s way. Local political and military leaders also ordered some villages to evacuate in order to forestall their (treacherous) acceptance of Jewish rule. In certain areas (around Jerusalem, and along the Syrian border), the Arab states ordered villages to uproot for strategic reasons.
2. I agree that this view of Karsh is on the extreme side. He's still a notable historian and I think it's okay to mention his view with proper framing/attribution. In general I wouldn't be opposed to replacing more extreme sources like Karsh with more moderate ones like Anita Shapira, except that Shapira would be too moderate to be considered part of an "Israeli narrative". Maybe the article can be restructured, but the current "two opposing narratives" structure calls for including less moderate voices such as Karsh.
3. While there's no (serious) debate today that expulsions occurred and were substantial, there is plenty of debate about the role of local commanders vs Zionist leaders, as well as the extent of flight and the reasons for it.
xDanielx T/C\R 21:55, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
What do you mean by "the role of local commanders vs Zionist leaders."? IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 22:49, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Taking Ben-Gurion as an example (perhaps the most important one), there is some lack of clarity over whether he explicitly ordered any expulsions. Yitzhak Rabin signed an expulsion order for Lydda, but gave two conflicting accounts about whether it was based on an explicit order by Ben-Gurion. With that potential exception, Ben-Gurion didn't give any explicit expulsion orders, although Morris argues he was "projecting a message of transfer".
Others have emphasized the role of local commanders acting based on military rather than political objectives: At the local level, commanders wanted to remove from the war zone a population that might aid the enemy. Nor did they want to have to deal with the needs of an occupied civilian population, preferring to remove it. (Shapira summarizing Kleiman). — xDanielx T/C\R 03:13, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Both versions of Rabin's account have BG ordering the expulsion of the inhabitants. The difference may only be due to Bar Zohar. Also, we should be aware of an issue around temporary evacuation of non-combatants, which is a normal feature of wars. Zionist propagandists claim that such evacuations are evidence of "they left at their leaders' orders", while failing to mention that the Jewish side also evacuated non-combatants from the front line. A large number of them, in fact. Zerotalk 04:30, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Re your lede changes, I think expulsions and violence, and the fear thereof, were the primary causes may be reasonable, since in a way everything stemmed from violence/war of fear thereof. That said, I still feel the sources you added don't back this very clearly or directly. They're just not making it very clear which particular analyses they're rejecting. Clearly they reject certain extreme views like Karsh's, but beyond that they seem unclear, e.g. does chased out include those who left in 1947 in anticipation of fighting?
Consider the bit you removed, the demoralizing impact of wealthier classes fleeing. The sources you added don't mention this (purported) factor, so it's not clear if they reject it in some way. According to Morris, No one [...] disputes the fact that much of the Arab middle and upper classes fled Palestine.
I'm not sure this is the right place to mention Nakba denial, since the term is generally used for more fringe views (like the ahistorical view that the land was largely empty), not so much for more plausible analyses that are the focus of the article.
Also, why unlink causes of the 1948 Palestinian exodus? — xDanielx T/C\R 05:40, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Unlinked causes of the 1948 Palestinian expulsion and flight since it is a terriblly written article. This article analyzes the causes much better than that article.
"The demoralizing impact of wealthier classes fleeing" can probably be readded, although that's maybe more a part of the flight than a cause of it.
Nakba denial seems pretty clear due for the lead.
- IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 21:39, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Causes of the 1948 Palestinian expulsion and flight is currently assessed as B-class. I'm aware of your views on it but not sure they're widely shared. Even if there was consensus that it's a terrible article, MOS:L doesn't mention that as a consideration for linking. — xDanielx T/C\R 21:48, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I don't feel strongly about it being linked or not. And I intend to fix that article in the near future anyway. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 22:00, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This stuff might be less active denialism so much as just crappily dated. 2001 is very dated at this point, and 2010 is not exactly young. If there are later sources stating how consensus has changed, or abjectly contradicting these older sources, then we can obviate them. This isn't a historiography. Iskandar323 (talk) 16:27, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Changes

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I made an edit implementing many changes here and was blanket reverted simply due to "there is a discussion in progress". I made many changes and it's not reasonable to simply revert them all. For instance I added sources and removed cleary bad sources. Please provide the actual reason why any changes are being disputed. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 19:23, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

If there's a proper discussion ongoing here, I haven't noticed it. I certainly haven't noticed any serious objections to tamping down the weight of a dated old historian source. I agree that the blanket revert was inappropriate, if not borderline disruptive. Very poor form. Iskandar323 (talk) 19:56, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It also isn't ideal to make major controversial changes to the lede when there's an active discussion that hasn't had much time to develop yet, and with concerns that haven't been addressed. — xDanielx T/C\R 21:05, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It's a little hard to assess your post above given its lack of supporting links, but if there's something that's off about an edit, common practice is to collegiately tweak it. Better for actual headway. Iskandar323 (talk) 21:23, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Reverting many edits across distinct subjects is invariably POV in my experience, or more charitably, lazy. Selfstudier (talk) 11:01, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ (Gelber, p. 79)

Ethnic cleansing

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In the lead, there is an equivocating line that says: "The expulsion of the Palestinians has since been described by some historians as ethnic cleansing, while others dispute this charge." The ethnic cleansing sources are newer; the denial sources are older. Somewhat ludicrously, Benny Morris sources are used to support both. However, his 2021 admission of the ethnic cleansing drastically supercedes his 2008 denial. The other two denial sources, from 2002 and 2005, obviously precede Pappé's The Ethnic Cleansing of Palestine and the last two decades of scholarship. The question that begs is: are there any current sources that still deny the ethnic cleansing? Iskandar323 (talk) 16:11, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Good point, this should be rewritten to express that the ethnic cleansing view is the mainstream or majority view and that the denial thereof is a fringe or minority view. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 19:14, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The Morris interview where he implicitly acknowledges ethnic cleansing was from 2004, no? Looks like the archive date was 2021.
I don't think Morris has ever denied that ethnic cleansing occurred, so he should probably be removed from that list of references. That said, it's his view that there was no top-down Zionist plan for systematic ethnic cleansing. He also tends to use less loaded language like "expulsions". — xDanielx T/C\R 21:23, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ah yes. Archive date. Erk. Iskandar323 (talk) 21:51, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Lede

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"The causes of the 1948 Palestinian exodus remain a significantly controversial topic in public and political discourse, with a prominent amount of denialism regarding the responsibility of Israeli/Yishuv forces, although most scholarship today acknowledges that expulsions and violence, and the fear thereof, were the primary causes."

This should be rephrased, where the last part of the sentence, the scholarship is the focus of the paragraph, and not the (unfounded) controversy. Makeandtoss (talk) 10:29, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Recent changes

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Made changes to lead here though I botched the edit summary.

@Iskandar323 this addresses your concerns per your talk page entry "Ethnic cleansing" and @Makeandtoss this addresses your concerns per your talk page entry "Lede".

- IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 20:13, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

👍 Iskandar323 (talk) 20:40, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I meant to say that the paragraph should start with "Most scholarship today..."
Anyway, the lede could be further improved: first paragraph with a general description, second with the main components and then the chronological details, third paragraph on the scholarship, fourth paragraph on the legacy.
This is my suggestion:

In the 1948 Palestine war, more than 700,000 Palestinian Arabs – about half of Mandatory Palestine's predominantly Arab population – were expelled or fled from their homes, at first by Zionist paramilitaries, and after the establishment of Israel, by its military. The expulsion and flight was a central component of the fracturing, dispossession, and displacement of Palestinian society, known as the Nakba.

About 250,000–300,000 Palestinians fled or were expelled during the 1947–1948 civil war in Mandatory Palestine, before the termination of the British Mandate on 14 May 1948. By the end of the 1948 Palestine war, dozens of massacres targeting Arabs were conducted by Israeli military forces and between 400 and 600 Palestinian villages were destroyed. Village wells were poisoned in a biological warfare programme and properties were looted to prevent Palestinian refugees from returning. Other sites were subject to Hebraization of Palestinian place names. The precise number of Palestinian refugees, many of whom settled in Palestinian refugee camps in neighboring states, is uncertain, although the number is around 700,000, being approximately 80 percent of the Palestinian Arab inhabitants of what became Israel.

Most scholarship today agrees that expulsions and violence, and the fear thereof, were the primary causes for the displacement. Factors involved in the exodus include direct expulsions by Israeli forces, destruction of Arab villages, psychological warfare including terrorism, massacres such as the widely publicized Deir Yassin massacre which caused many to flee out of fear, typhoid epidemics in some areas caused by Israeli well-poisoning, and the collapse of Palestinian leadership including the demoralizing impact of wealthier classes fleeing. The expulsion of the Palestinians has been described by most historians as ethnic cleansing, while a minority disputes this characterization. Denialism regarding the responsibility of Israeli/Yishuv forces in the displacement of Palestinians, and discourse about the causes of the 1948 Palestinian exodus continue to generate controversy.

A series of land and property laws were later passed by the first Israeli government that prevented displaced Palestinians from returning to their homes or claiming their property. They and many of their descendants remain refugees. The existence of the so-called Law of Return allowing for immigration and naturalization of any Jewish person and their family to Israel, while a Palestinian right of return has been denied, has been cited as an evidence for the charge that Israel practices apartheid. The status of the refugees, and in particular whether Israel will allow them the right to return to their homes, or compensate them, are key issues in the ongoing Israeli–Palestinian conflict.

Makeandtoss (talk) 11:23, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Also I think moving the quotes to the body while keeping in-line refs will make the lede easier to edit and work with. Makeandtoss (talk) 11:26, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Actually, is there even a reason why we have this article which seems to be covered by Nakba? Makeandtoss (talk) 12:04, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, it's more in-depth on the expulsions specifically, as opposed to all of the other aspects of the Nakba page. Iskandar323 (talk) 12:52, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fair enough. And any thoughts on the proposed changes above? Makeandtoss (talk) 08:49, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It's a little hard to inspect the proposed changes like that. If any small changes can be made incrementally in separately explained edits, and any bigger changes discussed more specifically, that might be better. I have no idea what past RFCs might inform the current form of the lead. Good idea to take a look. Iskandar323 (talk) 11:13, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think the fact "orders from the Arab leadership" should be mentioned as a factor to the Arab exodus. In addition to Yoav Gelber, this is corroborated by Benny Morris as being a factor in Haifa (see the subsection below), as well as in a host of other settlements.
Morris says that "all villagers in the Nazareth area", "all the villages between Haifa and Tel Aviv", Coastal Plain villages, neighborhoods bordering the Jewish areas in Jerusalem, were depopulated on orders from the general Arab headquarters or ALA. There was also apparently an evacuation order to Arabs living along the Palestine-Syrian border.
Here are some of the examples he gives: Shu'fat, Beit Hanina, al Jib, Judeira, Bir Nabala, Rafat, Dahi, Nein, Tampra, Kafr Misr, al Tira, Taiyiba, Na'ura, Nuqeib, ‘Arab al Satariyya, Beit Dajan, Kafr Manda, Majd al Kurum, Dimra, 'Illut, ‘Arab Mazarib, ‘Arab Sa‘ida, Ma’lul, Mujeidil, Beisan, Qastal, Qalandiya, some Jerusalem neighborhoods (Sheikh Jarrah, Wadi Joz, Musrara, Qatamon, Musara, Beit Hanina and others), Ma'dhar, Hadatha, 'Ulam, Sirin.
Therefore, while not the main factor as the Israeli scholarship originally claimed, it was definitely a factor, at least according to some (influential) scholars.
My suggestion is to change the sentence "Most scholarship today" to
Most scholarship today agrees that expulsions and violence, and the fear thereof, along with occasional orders from the Arab leadership, were the primary causes for the displacement.
Amayorov (talk) 20:04, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Are you planning to reference some historians that actually provide any opposing views and balance to Gelber and Morris at any point? Iskandar323 (talk) 20:12, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Do all the statements in the article provide references to 3+ influential scholars? Is that an official rule now? Amayorov (talk) 20:23, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Not my point. You appreciate that Gelber and Morris are both on the same side of a wide scholarly divide, yes? Iskandar323 (talk) 21:18, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
First, most sentences in the lead section are sources from a single, Arab or pro-Palestinian, scholar, such as Pappé, Nur, Khalidi, Ghanim.
Second, I don't agree that Morris and Gelber are "on the same side". Morris has revealed plenty of unsavoury information about Israel: e.g. the story about the Haganah's secret program of poisoning wells in 1948 was his discovery from a couple years ago. He is also the source of reference for many "pro-Palestinian" historians (e.g. Shlaim, Pappé). In contrast, Gelber is a more traditional Israeli historian.
Finally, you can't really seek "concensus across the divide" on every statement. That's partly because all archives of the Arab states, including those of the armies, parties, and diplomats, are still classified. Amayorov (talk) 21:30, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You're still not getting it. You are adding specific tracts of text without even looking to see what historians with a very different take on these events say about the same events. Yes, Morris is less blinkered than Gelber, but he is still a historian that resolutely produces historiography with a very discernable pitch, and the side that it favours—because it certainly does favour a side—is very clear. Now I'm sure that you can continue to beat around the bush if you like, but now is the point where you have to say, ok, I'll look up some of what I'm putting in in other sources, or you can keep putting in voices from only one side of a partisan divide and we will all have to chase you around the wiki adding POV tags to every page and section that you give the same treatment. Iskandar323 (talk) 21:49, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Frankly, I don't understand what you're suggesting I do.
I'm quoting Morris on objective facts, rather than partisan conclusions. Morris references plenty of primary material. Would you want me to quote the primary material directly, bypassing Morris? I could certainly do that.
This page already cites plenty Morris (e.g. regarding the Haganah's use of psychological warfare or the well-poisoning). At the same time, it often ignores him, whenever he discusses the Arabs' evacuation orders or that there was no centralised plan of expulsion ever promulgated by the IDF. Selective quoting could certainly be a concern.
Besides, this page already includes plenty of "according to Morris' estimates," "according to Ilan Pappé," "in Flapan' opinion," etc. Sometimes, Pappé is quoted without a qualification. Do you have a problem with Morris specifically? Amayorov (talk) 22:03, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I have a problem with the fact that you think you are getting "objective facts" from Morris, as opposed to his subjective opinions on the whatever any given piece of evidence may be, and in contrast to whatever subjective opinions also significant historians less aligned with his way of thinking have about the same given pieces of evidence. Iskandar323 (talk) 22:07, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Isn't that the case with plenty of other claims on this page? For example, it includes "According to Pappé, this mortar barrage was deliberately aimed at civilians to precipitate their flight from Haifa," while omitting Morris' strong objecting this claim?
Another problem is that, while Morris is already cited plenty of times, he's referenced selectively and often ignoring important context in his writing. Amayorov (talk) 22:24, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think this is really a fair criticism - Morris is about as mainstream as they come, with critics on both sides. He almost left Israel after Birth of the Palestinian Refugee Problem made it difficult for him to find a job there. — xDanielx T/C\R 22:09, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think you should all follow WP:SOURCESDIFFER and WP:BALANCE. Both Morris and the historians that disagree with him can be cited. Wafflefrites (talk) 22:33, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Reviewing all this, I think we are at the point, we should review all WP:BESTSOURCES for what happened. It's a historical event, there is no shortage of such sources and so this should not be difficult, just needs a bit of time. And we need to avoid getting bogged down in the weeds, the broad strokes we want, for example, Makeandtoss "Most scholarship today agrees that expulsions and violence, and the fear thereof, were the primary causes for the displacement" above, is that what the balance of bestsources says, or not? Selfstudier (talk) 09:44, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I would change it to
Most scholarship today agrees that expulsions and violence, and the fear thereof, along with occasional orders from the Arab leadership, were the primary causes for the displacement.
Amayorov (talk) 09:58, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Haifa

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As it currently is, the article only describes Morris' description of the psychological warfare as a factor. However, the quote is taken out of context, and later on, Morris states that

The Haganah mortar attacks of 21–22 April were primarily designed to break Arab morale in order to bring about a swift collapse of resistance and speedy surrender. There is no evidence that the commanders involved hoped or expected that it would lead to mass evacuation (though events in Tiberias four days before must have been prominent in their minds).

At the same time, the article ignores the Morris' description of the events of April 22, during which the Arab leaders decided to leave, despite being entreated by the Jews and British to stay. By the nightfall of April 22, there were still 30,000-40,000 Arabs remaining in the town. Therefore, I think adding this information is important. Amayorov (talk) 19:59, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Per my comment in previous section, review all sources and see what the balance of them says, we don't need to get into the weeds on everything. Selfstudier (talk) 09:46, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
My concrete proposals are:
1. Follow up "According to Pappé, this mortar barrage was deliberately aimed at civilians to precipitate their flight from Haifa" with "while Morris disputes this claim[1]: 300 "
2. Add the following sentence following Karsh's assessment.
Benny Morris agrees, while also acknowledging "an undercurrent of expulsive thinking."[1]: 198–207 
2. Add the following paragraphs after "I am sending you posters in Arabic; disperse on route."
Truce negotiations between Haganah and the Arab leaders took place on April 22. Despite the Haganah's assurances that "Arabs will carry on their work as equal and free citizens of Haifa and will enjoy all services along with the other members of the community," the Arab representatives stated that "the Arab population wished to evacuate Haifa... man, woman and child." According to Morris, this led Jewish officials to (incorrectly) believed that the "unexpected exodus from Haifa" was part of a comprehensive Arab plot to "villify Jews".[1]: 195, 200 
From April 22 onwards, Morris states that there is "a surfeit of evidence" that the Arab leaders both ordered and encouraged the evacuation[1]: 198  Both Morris and Karsh reference British and American intelligence reports, Alan Cunningham's assessment, personal memoirs, and Haganah's assessments, that "the Jews have been making extensive efforts to prevent wholesale evacuation," while the "total evacuation is being urged on the Haifa Arabs from higher Arab quarters and that the townsfolk themselves are against it."[2][3][4][5] Regarding the reasons for the alleged Arab encouragement of the exodus, they speculate that it was to avoid "possibility of Haifa Arabs being used as hostages in future operations after May 15," and to escape "the gearing of Transjordan's armed force for a wholesale massacre"[6][7]
3. Add this paragraph at the end.
Morris assess that the fall and exodus of Arab Haifa, given the city’s "pivotal political, administrative and economic role," was a major "precipitant" of the subsequent flight from other locations.[1]: 186–187 
As always, I'm open to suggestions! Amayorov (talk) 22:29, 11 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sounds reasonable. Alaexis¿question? 22:22, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks! I've shortened it for conciseness. If there are no objections, I will be adding it in 12 hours. Amayorov (talk) 22:29, 11 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've reformatted your references since {{r}} doesn't work inside <ref> tags. I've no objections to a different, more elegant solution. Best, Wham2001 (talk) 13:57, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I don't have time to get into this right now but I strongly object to these additions. This is pretty blatant denialism being added to the article. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 05:53, 14 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@TarnishedPath Why did you revert these edits? Amayorov (talk) 06:33, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Please see what I wrote in the below topic. I don't find Morris's Nakba denialism appropriate or WP:DUE. TarnishedPathtalk 06:38, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You shouldn't revert the edits before discussing them.
Again, what I strongly object to is misrepresentation and selective referencing of Morris' work. You cannot quote a huge paragraph on him regarding Haganah's psychological warfare, while ignoring everything he says above and below it. Besides, Nakba denialism is a strange argument. Nobody denies that it happens, but as Wikipedia article, it should reflect the broad body of research about it, from world-leading academics. Selective quoting them is exactly what would make WP:UNDUE. Amayorov (talk) 06:42, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Morris is already referenced in the article. You made substantial changes all based on his opinions. That's entirely WP:UNDUE. TarnishedPathtalk 06:50, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
He's referenced selectively, by placing emphasis on parts of his work, while ignoring everything he says below or after. This is clearly interferes with ensuring a WP:NOV. Do you have any argument for omitting parts of his work, rather than it being a supported Nakba denialism? Amayorov (talk) 06:59, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ps, there is no policy which requires that I not remove material before discussing it. Please consider WP:ONUS. TarnishedPathtalk 06:52, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It also says
Neutrality requires that mainspace articles and pages fairly represent all significant viewpoints that have been published by reliable sources, in proportion to the prominence of each viewpoint in those sources.
Given that Morris is the most references author on this page anyway, selectively quoting him or ignoring him is WP:UNDUE. Amayorov (talk) 07:01, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You make an argument for reducing the amount of quoting of the opinions of one specific source, not for increasing it. I don't think we're going to agree on this so I've posted notices on the three most relevant Wiki Projects talk pates and the Nakba article's talk page. TarnishedPathtalk 07:04, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Can you link me to them? Amayorov (talk) 07:05, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
They are at the Israel WikiProject's talk, the Palestine WikiProject's talk, the Israel and Palestine collaboration WikiProject's talk and the Nakba article's talk. TarnishedPathtalk 07:20, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think we need more discussion here. Morris is quoted outrightly wrongly. An example is regarding the alleged Jewish National Committee's failing to give assurances to the Arab leadership during the truce negotiations in Haifa. In fact, Morris explicitly says that it was the Arab National Committee, which couldn't guarantee that no incidents would occur from their side.
I'm also against selective quoting and cherry-picking the bits to promote a particular view. For example, Morris (rightly) quoted on the Haganah's use of psychological warfare, the well-poisoning program, the expulsions from Lydda and Ramle, etc. At the same time, he's ignored when it comes to the Arab evacuation orders, that the Haganah's mortars didn't target civilians at Haifa, and plenty of other important instances.
I've seen people say that certain parts from Morris cannot be included because they're "Nakba minimising". We cannot separate a historian's work into "Nakba minimising" and "Nakba maximising", and only quote the latter, if we want to build a neutral unbiased encyclopaedia. Of course, any historians disagreeing with him should be included too.
@IOHANNVSVERVS @Wafflefrites @XDanielx @Iskandar323 @BilledMammal @Wham2001 Amayorov (talk) 11:34, 18 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Rather than assume that he is routinely selectively quoted, alternatives include that he is mentioned more where his input provides particular insight and less where his input may be contradicted by other sources. Iskandar323 (talk) 13:20, 18 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Regarding the first issue, I've added a {{cn}} tag to the sentence in question. If no sources are provided confirming it then it can't stay in the article.
Let's discuss selective quoting and cherry-picking on a case-by-case basis in dedicated threads, otherwise it's very hard to follow the discussion.
In any case the arguments for or against using a given source should be policy-based, e.g., that there is another reliable source saying the opposite. Alaexis¿question? 20:58, 18 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've added the uncontroversial suggestions 1-2. Regarding the truce negotiations and the Arab orders, which attracted most disagreement, I suggest opening a WP:RFC. Amayorov (talk) 18:38, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Unconditional surrender at Haifa: gross misrepresentation

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The article currently states

On 21–22 April in Haifa, after the Haganah waged a day-and-a-half battle including psychological warfare, the Jewish National Committee was unable to offer the Palestinian council assurance that an unconditional surrender would proceed without incident.

I cannot find this confirmed by any of the provided references, to Benny Morris or otherwise. In fact, Morris refers to the Haifa Arab National Committee (NC), who, in response to a truce deal, responded "that they were not in a position to sign a truce, as they had no control over the Arab military elements in the town and that . . . they could not fulfill the terms of the truce, even if they were to sign. They then said as an alternative that the Arab population wished to evacuate Haifa . . . man, woman and child."

That is the same Haifa Arab National Committee that, in communique number 7 (dated February 22 1948), and with approval from the Arab Higher Committee, demanded that the Arabs cease shooting and return to their regular workplace.

This is a gross misrepresentation that must be corrected. I suggest the following

On 21–22 April in Haifa, after the Haganah waged a day-and-a-half battle including elements of psychological warfare, the Haifa Arab National Committee was unable to accept the truce deal and decided to evacuate the town's Arab population.

As always, I'm looking forward to suggestions and corrections. Amayorov (talk) 13:51, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The material at Battle of Haifa (1948)#The battle is correct? Selfstudier (talk) 14:21, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, Battle of Haifa (1948) makes no reference to the Jewish National Committee. However, it's ambiguous too. It refers to the "National Committee (Haifa)" that couldn't "guarantee that no incidents would occur." That should be amended to make it clear that it was the Arab NC, and that it couldn't guarantee that no incidents would occur from their side. Amayorov (talk) 08:47, 14 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Walid Khalidi has repeatedly debunked the myth of Arab evacuation orders in Haifa. See, for example, "The Fall of Haifa Revisited" (2008). إيان (talk) 05:04, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Agree that it's inappropriate and WP:UNDUE to go down the pay of Nakba minimisation. TarnishedPathtalk 05:45, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It has not been debunked. Walid Khalidi only analysed radio broadcasts to come to his conclusions, while Morris bases his conclusions on American/British intelligence, conclusions from the High Commissioner for Palestine, and internal Haganah reports, and other evidence. You don't have to state this as fact, but as a possible perspective – from a historian, on whose research much of the rest of the article is based.
Again, what I strongly object to is misrepresentation and selective referencing of Morris' work. This example is particularly egregious – there were no Jewish National Committee that could not "offer the Palestinian council assurance that an unconditional surrender would proceed without incident." You cannot reference Morris on this, when he talks about the opposite! Amayorov (talk) 06:39, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@TarnishedPath Amayorov (talk) 06:39, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Morris is a biased writer who engages in Nakba denialism. The position is WP:UNDUE. I see no problem with some small inclusion of his views in the article but the expansion that you introduced, based on his POV alone was WP:UNDUE. TarnishedPathtalk 06:48, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"Morris is a biased writer who engages in Nakba denialism." – I find this statement ridiculous, giving that he was the first who uncovered the extent of Nakba, and that his works are widely quoted by even such authors as Pappé and Finkelstein.
He's no more biased than any of the other authors, and must be referenced non-selectively. He's already the most sourced from author on this page. Amayorov (talk) 07:04, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Again you're making an argument for reducing the amount of sourcing to the opinions of one specific writer, not increasing it. TarnishedPathtalk 07:06, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It's not about his "opinions", but rather the primary evidence that he uncovered and deemed relevant. I'm making an argument for quoting him non-selectively, in order to make the article WP:NOV. If you wish to reduce the amount of referencing him, you'd have to rewrite over half the page. Amayorov (talk) 07:11, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
We always quote selectively both for brevity and because of copyright. The opposite of quoting selectively would be quoting the entire work. I do not see how expanding the quotation for him is useful, especially given Morris is already given plenty of airplay in this article. TarnishedPathtalk 07:17, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Because you quote evidence that he provides, supporting the fact that the Haganah engaged in psychological warfare at Haifa, while ignoring the many pages where he describes the "surfeit" of evidence that the Arab leadership (both local and the AHC) ordered and spurred on the evacuation. Such selective quoting seems like pushing a particular POV. Amayorov (talk) 07:19, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I entirely disagree and I find covering Morris's opinion on that to be Nakba minimisation at the very best. TarnishedPathtalk 07:21, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You cannot separate a historian's work into "Nakba maximising" and "Nakba minimising" and quote only the former, if you want to build a neutral encyclopaedia. Amayorov (talk) 07:29, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You cannot separate a historian's work into "Nakba maximising" and "Nakba minimising" and quote only the former. That's certainly not a synthetic distinction I proposed, nor a course of action I suggested. If it were a course of action I suggested I'd be engaged in the complete removal of Benny Morris, which is demonstrably not the case. What however is going against NPOV is seeking to disproportionately rely on the view points of exactly one author. It needs to be toned down a bit. He's not the only author out there. TarnishedPathtalk 11:04, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
That's certainly not a synthetic distinction I proposed, nor a course of action I suggested. Certainly, but the article currently appears to be doing just that, at least to some extent. Amayorov (talk) 11:09, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Morris's name is mentioned 18 times in the body of article. 3 times in notes, 25 times in the references and 3 times in the source list. Just the 21 times (18 inline and 3 via notes) he's mentioned by name attributing his view point says that is almost certainly not the case and in fact that we have somewhat of a problem with an over-reliance on the POV of Benny Morris. TarnishedPathtalk 11:36, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, but he's quoted selectively. He's (rightly) quoted on the Haganah's use of psychological warfare, the well-poisoning program, the expulsions from Lydda and Ramle, etc. At the same time, he's ignored when it comes to the Arab evacuation orders, that the Haganah's mortars didn't target civilians at Haifa, and plenty of other important instances.
Sometimes, he's even quoted perversely, such as regarding the alleged Jewish National Committee's failing to give assurances during the truce negotiations at Haifa, whereas in fact it was the Arab National Committee. Amayorov (talk) 12:04, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Worth noting that the article being republished here, "The Fall of Haifa", was written by Khalidi in 1959 when Morris was 11. It looks like Khalidi added an intro to this republication which briefly criticizes Morris, but of course the underlying 1959 article does not.
The 1959 article probably isn't too relevant today. E.g. it says that the Haifa National Committee did nothing to encourage evacuation, which I don't think anyone (today) denies. Even Karsh would agree, saying Although the Committee strove to curb the mass flight, urging Haifa's Arabs to stay put and castigating those who fled-occasionally, these warnings were backed by the torching of escapees' belongings-its remonstrations proved of no avail.
I think Morris' views on the topic are quite significant and should be mentioned. There are scholars who argue Morris overemphasizes evacuation orders, which can be mentioned as well. Criticism isn't generally a reason to remove content, particularly in this area where every prominent work attracts criticism.
"Overuse of Morris" doesn't seem like a convincing reason to remove content either, partly since his work in this area is quite prominent (surely Technological singularity shouldn't limit mentions of Kurzweil?), but more importantly because WP:WEIGHT pertains to viewpoints on a particular topic (like evacuation orders), not to particular sources. — xDanielx T/C\R 22:17, 18 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
°The only problem above is overuse of Morris, not his bias.
  • The article, like most of wiki I/P historical articles, is in a poor state. And one of the reasons is that considerable emphasis is given to citing positions by prominent scholars in the midst of the factual narrative. All opinions of this kind should always be relegated below a strict narrative focus on the chronological reconstruction that established the facts as they are known to unfold day by day/week by week.
  • The section on Haifa here is woefully inadequate. It should, by rights, synthesize Battle of Haifa (1948), but we cannot do that at present because that is one more example of an inadequate reconstruction of the factual record, and overreliance on just one historian: 16 of the 43 references go back to Morris, the next most used sources are primary documents of the period, and then we have passing references to bits and pieces from Pappé, Segev, Azoulay etc., as minor voices. Kimche gets more mention than any of those. There is no use of Walid Khalidi, The Fall of Haifa Revisited Journal of Palestine Studies, Vol. 37, No. 3 (Spring 2008), pp. 30-58, which though earlier than Morris 2004, was updated in a 2008 reprint which took in and criticized Morris' narrative, including an accusation that Morris ignored or suppressed core information available to him.
  • So rather than jam more Morris stuff in here, there are two tasks. The primary one would be to revise the Battle of Haifa article, with an approach that established a detailed factual record of the sequence of events, (with brief notes when secondary accounts differ) and once that is done, readjust the Haifa section here, which is pathetically scrappy.
Nishidani (talk) 08:35, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
+1, I too am not particularly happy at this excessive focus on Morris. Selfstudier (talk) 08:58, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
All opinions of this kind should always be relegated below a strict narrative focus on the chronological reconstruction that established the facts as they are known to unfold day by day/week by week. – how could this be done in light of Wikipedia:No original research, and the often significant differences between secondary sources as to what those facts were?
The only problem above is overuse of Morris, not his bias. – in my view, the problem is that he's used selectively. As I wrote above, you cannot separate a historian's work into "Nakba maximising" and "Nakba minimising" and quote only the former, if you want to build a neutral encyclopaedia.
overreliance on just one historian – One must distinguish between backing up objective facts using a historian's research, and representing the conclusions that that historian draws from them as fact. The fact is that Morris brought light on a lot of primary evidence from Israeli and Western archives from the 1940s, which often cannot be complemented, because the Arab archives are all still closed Amayorov (talk) 09:01, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Morris brought light on a lot of primary evidence from Israeli and Western archives from the 1940s, which often cannot be complemented, because the Arab archives are all still closed—bruh. You gotta be kidding with this.
I'm with TarnishedPath, Nishidani, and Selfstudier. إيان (talk) 17:17, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
First, as I've said, I'm not arguing for Morris to be used exclusively — rather that he is referenced non-selectively, instead of cherry-picking the bits to promote a particular view. To some extent, that is presently the case. Even more worrying is that sometimes he is cited outright wrongly, such as the reference to a "Jewish National Council" at Haifa that couldn't guarantee a ceasefire without an incident, whereas in fact it was the Arab NC.
Secondly, my point is true — all Arab historical archives, including those of the military, the main political parties, and royal courts, are still closed. That's not to say that you can't try and compensate for them. Amayorov (talk) 17:53, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
We can certainly utilise more sources and note when they disagree but the weight given to various positions should be based on the scholarly sources (reviews, citation, critique) and not on editors' own opinions. Alaexis¿question? 21:02, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ a b c d e Morris (2004)
  2. ^ 257 and 317 FS Section Weekly Report No.3 for Week Ending 28 April 1948', paragraph 4, WO 275/79; cited by : 198 
  3. ^ Cunningham to Secretary of State, telegram 1127, 25 April 1948, Cunningham Collection, 111/4/52; cited in : 198 
  4. ^ Lippincott (American Consulate, Haifa) to Department, No.40, 25 April 1948 and No.44, 26 April 1948, NA Record Group 84, Haifa Consulate, 800 - Political Affairs; cited by
  5. ^ Yorkshire Evening Post, 24 April 1948, 'Arabs plan complete evacuation of Jewish controlled Haifa'
  6. ^ 6th Airborne Division's Logbook of 1805hrs, 4 May 1948, Sheet 148, Serial 653; cited by
  7. ^ Internal Haganah report, Hiram to Tene, 'The Question of the Arab Evacuation from Haifa', 28 April 1948, HA 105/257, p.360; cited by

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Plan Dalet

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Shouldn't this be mentioned in the lede and expanded more about in the body? I definitely see it having a standalone section. Makeandtoss (talk) 09:36, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Seems it was -allegedly- implemented for an eight week period between April and May 1948, but the ethnic cleansing had already started since late 1947 and continued until at least 1949. So is this the main "responsible" document or is there something I am missing? Makeandtoss (talk) 09:26, 16 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Well poisoning

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Currently this article accuses Israeli soldiers of poisoning wells and the link to Well poisoning is mainly about antisemitic libels against Jews. How sure are we that Israel indeed poisoned wells during the 1948 war? Is the scholarship solid on this? VR (Please ping on reply) 03:23, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not sure we should link to well poisoning and propose that we don't. As for the scholarship, it is based on a research article by two Israeli historians who cite official archival records so, yes, it is solid. Zerotalk 04:30, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think since Morris's 2023 paper, we are very sure. See the detailed discussion and quotes/sources in Operation Cast Thy Bread (for a condensed summary with cites/quotes, see the sentence about it in Nakba). Levivich (talk) 17:01, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

RfC – In the article section about "Haifa", should the following paragraph be added?

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Should Benny Morris' research on the evacuation orders from Haifa be included in 1948 Palestinian expulsion and flight#Haifa:

Morris asserts that the initial order to evacuate came from local Arab leadership, and that the Arab Higher Committee endorsed it post factum. Among the evidence he cites are British and American intelligence reports, an assessment by the High Commissioner of Palestine, as well as statements by the Haifa Arab Emergency Committee on 22 April 1948. According to Morris, possible reasons included clearing the way for Transjordan's impending entry into the war and avoiding the population being used as hostages.[1]

Amayorov (talk) 19:56, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Morris (2004), pp. 195-201

No

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  1. No, the article is already overdependent on Morris. We should be seeking to reduce the amount of references and quotes to Morris, not increase the reliance. We should seek to utilise other sources more often. TarnishedPathtalk 07:10, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Morris is attributed 20 times in the body of article. He's mentioned 3 times in notes, 27 times in the references and 3 times in the source list. Just the 23 times (20 inline and 3 via notes) he's mentioned by name attributing his viewpoint says that we have somewhat of a problem with an over-reliance on the POV of Benny Morris. Making this article more dependent on the POV of Benny Morris is undesirable. We need less Benny Morris, not more. TarnishedPathtalk 09:27, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    My problem is with WP:CHERRYPICKING. While Morris is frequently cited, only selective parts of his work are considered, with other sections—arguable more significant in the source material—being entirely omitted, seemingly because their don't align with a particular narrative.
    For instance, the section on Haganah’s use of psychological warfare occupies 70% of the article section by character count and largely relies on Morris, with much of it taken verbatim or heavily paraphrased. However, Morris’ 2004 work dedicates only two pages to psychological warfare, whereas at least nine pages focus on Arab evacuation orders, which are excluded. Amayorov (talk) 12:21, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    My problem is with WP:CHERRYPICKING. Not what this RFC is about, tho. Your problem seems to be what the article says about Haifa? Selfstudier (talk) 12:27, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I believe WP:CHERRYPICKING might counter the argument about over-reliance on Morris that @TarnishedPath is making above. The discussion is specifically about the inclusion of the paragraph in RFC. Amayorov (talk) 12:36, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    No a misapplied essay doesn't counter anything. TarnishedPathtalk 12:39, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The substantive issue is that you cannot cherry-pick an author's work (perhaps to support a particular narrative), while omitting the rest, even when the author himself devotes more attention to it. Amayorov (talk) 12:51, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    As I stated to you in the above conversation, we always draw from parts of sources. We do this in order to not be overly verbose and to not violate copyright. We cover the important parts. That does not mean that we are engaging in WP:CHERRYPICKING (an essay might I note). You've not provided any substantive reasoning for why we should further give Benny Morris's POV more airplay. TarnishedPathtalk 12:33, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    We cover the important parts. – the selection of content from Morris' POV is currently very disproportionate. WP:DUE: "Neutrality requires that mainspace articles and pages fairly represent all significant viewpoints that have been published by reliable sources, in proportion to the prominence of each viewpoint in those sources." Amayorov (talk) 12:39, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The fact that we cover Morris so heavily is very disproportionate. There should be less Morris, not more. TarnishedPathtalk 12:40, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    First, even if there's to be less Morris, he must be covered neutrally and in proportion to the prominence he gives to different sections in his work. Second, I don't think we should cut Morris, but we could certainly add more material from other authors. Amayorov (talk) 12:47, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    There is absolutely no policy that prescribes we cover authors in proportion to the prominence THEY give different sections of their works. Per WP:BALASP, An article should not give undue weight to minor aspects of its subject but should strive to treat each aspect with a weight proportional to its treatment in the body of reliable, published material on the subject. We should give weight proportional to the body of work on the subject as a whole, not be so heavily representative of the POV of one author. The amount Morris's views are represented in the article is completely out of balance. We need less Morris not more. TarnishedPathtalk 02:19, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Nor is there any "too much Morris" policy. WP:BALASP applies to individual topics and this is not a "minor aspect". Policies aside, it seems like a common sense principle to not represent sources in a manner which misleads the reader about their views. — xDanielx T/C\R 14:13, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Not covering every view put forth by an author is not equivalent to misleading readers about an author's view. WP:BALASP isn't just about not giving undue weight to minor aspects. The section I quoted clearly states that we should treat each aspect with a weight proportional to its treatment in the body of reliable, published material on the subject. At present we are massively out of proportion, as compared to the body of work on the subject, due to the article's heavy reliance on Morris. TarnishedPathtalk 03:23, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Out of proportion in the sense of "too much Morris"? Morris isn't really a viewpoint, or an aspect of the topic as BALASP calls it.
    Stepping back, I'm a bit unclear on what you're advocating for. Similar statements could be attributed to other sources such as Karsh. Is that the sort of outcome you're looking for, or would you object to the content even with a different source? — xDanielx T/C\R 04:41, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Other editors have already made it clear that Morris's account is contested. So with that in mind any proposed addition here should be different. Broadly what I suggest is that the article not heavily rely on any particular author and the one that sticks out the most is Morris. TarnishedPathtalk 05:52, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    We don't normally remove attributed statements because they're contested; rather we expand the content to include any other significant viewpoints. — xDanielx T/C\R 16:44, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Since this is history, there should exist a central viewpoint of the events and that's what we should be going with, if we are to include an attributed statement, that suggests a non significant alternative view rather than a significant one. It's a matter of weight, if Morris view is significant then it should be supported by others as well and if that's the case, then we can cite is as a significant minority view without direct attribution. Editors seem to be arguing that Morris view is the mainstream majority view, I don't see the evidence for that. Selfstudier (talk) 16:58, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  2. No Afaics, this "dispute" appears to be about the Haifa displacement and how much of it was due to Arab evacuation orders. There is contradictory historiography about that and I think that first the Causes article should be sorted out, perhaps a specific section dealing with Haifa and the sources for that and only then use that as a basis for here and for the Battle article. Selfstudier (talk) 12:54, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    If there is contradictory historiography, then both viewpoints should be included, preferably with an outline how they relate to each other. We aren't here to settle historical disputes, but to accurately and neutrally reflect existing work. Amayorov (talk) 13:04, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I didn't dispute that, I said to begin at the "Causes" article first. Selfstudier (talk) 13:07, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I believe the two articles have different objectives. The "Causes" article should aggregate all relevant information and outline the factors behind the displacement, giving appropriate weight to each factor based on its treatment by reputable historians.
    This article, on the other hand, should describe the events of the displacement, in a more or less chronological manner. The fact that foreign intelligence and local officials documented evacuation orders, and that these have been referenced extensively by reputable historians, should be included. Amayorov (talk) 13:30, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    This is just about Haifa, tho. Selfstudier (talk) 13:37, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes, this RFC is specifically about the Haifa section. Amayorov (talk) 13:39, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    NPOV doesn't have any exceptions based on the state of a different article; why would that be relevant? — xDanielx T/C\R 14:04, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  3. No as per TarnishedPaths reasonings. Bluethricecreamman (talk) 15:13, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Based on @TarnishedPath’s reasoning, would you be content with removing Morris’ research on Haganah’s use of psychological warfare, in favor of his findings regarding evacuation orders (i.e. the paragraph above)? I think that’s a terrible solution and would cut down the article significantly. But it would be a fairer representation of Morris’ work. As I said, he spends roughly 2-3 pages discussing the former and around ten – the latter. The ratio of his primary sources is similar. Amayorov (talk) 15:46, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    It's not our job to fairly represent Morris' work, we need to represent the balance of all sources, for the Haifa displacement in this case. Selfstudier (talk) 16:04, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  4. No, the first two paragraphs of this section are messed up enough as is. Begins by citing Morris for what Historian Efraim Karsh writes... and misrepresenting Morris in the process. Inserting Walid Khalidi disputes... with a citation and text which are confusing concern a separate dispute, then Benny Morris agrees with Karsh... which there is hardly support for.

    I don't know that there should be a separate "Causes" article, but if Selfstudier thinks first add content there, then import/merge back here to fix this mess, ok. If Morris is used for AHC "orders" the content should be faithful, "egging on the continuing evacuation" during a confusing time with events rapidly changing. And should certainly put in the context of his overall argument for outside blanket evacuation orders: "as with most rumours, there was a grain of truth in them".

    The suggested content is not even accurate in its According to Morris.... He quotes but does not identify a 6th Airborne Division document

    Probable reason for Arab Higher Executive [i.e., AHC] ordering Arabs to evacuate Haifa is to avoid possibility of Haifa Arabs being used as hostages in future operations after May 15. Arabs have also threatened to bomb Haifa from the air.

    but i do not see him making such an argument. fiveby(zero) 16:09, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • This isn't relevant to the RfC. However, I agree that the start of the section is messy and needs work. Where is Morris misrepresented? E.g. There is no evidence that the commanders involved hoped or expected that it would lead to mass evacuation – Morris (2004), p.200.
    • p.198: But if the weight of the evidence suggests that the initial order to evacuate had come from the local [Arab] leadership, there is a surfeit of evidence that the AHC and its local supporters endorsed it ex post facto during the following days, egging on the continuing evacuation. Then he spends the next pages describing thsi evidence. I think this pretty much covers the paragraph in the RfC.
    • Sure, Morris doesn't himself state the most likely reasons for the Arab evacuation orders. However, he sites several documents, among which are the 6th Airborne Division, Alex Cunningham and Lippincott (The American Consul at Haifa). He doesn't provide any evidence contradicting them.
    @Fiveby How would you suggest rephrasing the paragraph to better reflect Morris' position? Amayorov (talk) 17:28, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    I would not try and rephrase the paragraph at this time. I think the reader would best be served by first looking for agreement amongst the sources for what can be stated outright without in-text attribution. Leading from Morris I would first look at expanding the article's weak ...one of the most notable flights of this stage. with

    The fall and exodus of Arab Haifa were among the major events of the war. The departure of the town’s Arabs, who before the war had numbered 65,000, by itself accounted for some 10 per cent of the Arab refugee total. The fall of, and flight from, Haifa, given the city’s pivotal political, administrative and economic role, was a major direct and indirect precipitant of the subsequent exodus from elsewhere in the North and other areas of the country, including Jaffa.

    This is important for the reader and where we should see wide agreement in the sources. Next

    The mass exodus of 21 April – early May must be seen against the backdrop of the gradual evacuation of the city by some 20,000–30,000 of its inhabitants, including most of the middle and upper classes, over December 1947 – early April 1948...

    where it is likely there is some disagreement as to the importance ascribed, but some content could probably be worked out without resorting to the ugly According to Morris... Proceeding this way would be doing what editors are supposed to be doing summarizing sources rather than cherry-picking to push a conclusion. Something about "orders" would probably eventually warrant inclusion, but as is i agree completely with Selfstudier that this is pursued only to unduly emphasize the apparent fact of of Arab orders while ignoring the surrounding context and what exactly happened. And no, you can't take a quote from an unknown member of 6th Airborne or others and claim Morris agrees without him explicitly agreeing in his text. fiveby(zero) 15:25, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  5. No. Levivich's suggestion that we "replace Morris's attributed views on this with something in Wikivoice sourced to multiple sources" is the correct solution. The historiographical dispute involving Morris, Karsh, Khalidi etc can be covered in the historiography section of this article or in a historiography section at the article Battle of Haifa (1948). IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 20:25, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Historiography wouldn't be a good place for it. Historiography refers to the study of methods used by historians. It is not an appropriate section to describe historical disputes.
    Describing disputes is a part of WP:WIKIVOICE: Wikipedia aims to describe disputes, but not engage in them. Is what you and @Levivich are suggesting basically including the RfC paragraph, but adding other researchers' PoV after those of Morris? So a 'YES' but with further info? Amayorov (talk) 20:59, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Amayorov, there's no need to reply to each and every person who !votes No. You're appearing to be WP:BLUDGEONing this discussion to within an inch of its life. TarnishedPathtalk 02:00, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  6. No, I think, as a general rule, the opinions of Scholar X should not be sourced to a work by Scholar X. Rather, if the opinion of Scholar X is WP:DUE, we'd be able to source that to Scholars Y and Z, etc. Here, there is no lack of scholarship that explicitly talks about the opinions of Morris. Rather than editors choosing which part of Morris's work to highlight (which is WP:OR), we should rely on WP:RS, and summarize those portions of Morris's opinions that multiple high-quality RS summarize, cited to those RS (to Scholars Y and Z). (Of course we can also add a cite to the particular Morris book or whatever it is that the RSes are discussing.) Levivich (talk) 02:05, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    What policy is this based on? Alaexis¿question? 11:22, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    WP:NOR, WP:NPOV. Levivich (talk) 14:08, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Morris is already a secondary source (in relation to the topic of the article), so your argument seems to be about a preference WP:TERTIARY sources. While those are allowed, they're not that common and aren't really encouraged by any policy. — xDanielx T/C\R 14:19, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    No that's not right on either count. An author's work is a primary source for the author's opinion given in that work, and of course articles should be based on secondary sources as our policies say. Aside from all of that, WP:DUE says an opinion or viewpoint is included based on its prominence in RSes. So Morris's viewpoints are only DUE if they're prominent in the entire body of RSes, which is why we should cite other RSes, and multiple RSes, for Morris's opinion (not just Morris directly). Citing Morris directly doesn't establish that Morris's opinion is DUE.
    That book we're citing is like 600+ pages. Who decides which of the paragraphs in that book are worth quoting/citing/mentioning? Not Wikipedia editors, it should be decided by other RSes. Morris should be quoted when he's quoted by other RSes, not when Wikipedia editors decide to quote him. His opinion should be summarized when it's summarized by other RSes, not by Wikipedia editors deciding which parts are worth summarizing, as that would be OR. Levivich (talk) 14:32, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Per WP:NOR, primary sources are original materials that are close to an event, and are often accounts written by people who are directly involved. Benny Morris's book about the topic of this article is not a primary source as it's not "original material that is close to an event" and he was not directly involved in these events. Alaexis¿question? 19:30, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    That's some selective quotation from the WP:PSTS section of WP:NOR. The work where Morris says "X" is a secondary source for the claim "X", but a primary source for the claim "Morris said X". The way we know if "X" is WP:DUE for inclusion is by looking at its prominence in WP:RS. If Morris and many others say "X", then "X" is WP:DUE. The way we know whether "Morris said X" is by looking at the prominence of "Morris said X" in RSes. If lots of RSes talk about "Morris said X", then "Morris said X" is WP:DUE for inclusion. And there are lots of examples of "Morris said X" that's WP:DUE for inclusion, because lots of RSes talk about what Morris said. So whether this particular instance of "Morris said X" is WP:DUE depends on whether RSes other than Morris cover this particular instance of "Morris said X". Levivich (talk) 19:59, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    While WP:PSTS isn't very explicit about it, in practice we classify sources as primary or secondary in relation to a broader topic. Yes, in some trivial sense every source is a primary source in relation to itself, but practically PSTS isn't concerned with those trivial relations. If it was, the majority of attributed statements throughout Wikipedia would be in violation of WP:PRIMARY. — xDanielx T/C\R 21:40, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Sorry, but this is very strange reasoning. I could understand it if we were writing an article about Morris himself and what views he personally held, but we aren’t. Amayorov (talk) 21:54, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    By the same logic, do you think that the sentence "According to Ilan Pappé, the Zionists organised a campaign of threats" should be removed because it's sourced to Pappe and not another historian? Alaexis¿question? 19:32, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I think that can and should be changed from an attributed statement sourced to one source, to a statement in wikivoice sourced to multiple sources. Levivich (talk) 19:52, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Can you clarify what you mean by that? Literally, most contentious points on Wikipedia are discussed as “Historian X claims x.[ref 1] Y disagrees and writes y.[ref 2]” Do you propose to make this a single sentence? Amayorov (talk) 21:49, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  1. @Amayorov, You're continuing to have your two cents at multiple places throughout the discussion. I have asked you to desist from this previously. Please do not continue WP:BLUDGEONing this RFC. TarnishedPathtalk 00:38, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    None of the comments I made in the last 24h are “repeating the same point” or “ignoring evidence”. Here, I’m constructive engaging to clarify a suggestion made by a fellow editor. In a different place, I reviewed two newly linked research articles by Khalidi. In another, I acknowledged that Morris doesn’t himself make an assertion as to the causes of the orders, but quotes from a primary source verbatim.
    Your behaviour seems to be very WP:UNCIVIL. Amayorov (talk) 00:53, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    WP:BLUDGEONing isn't confined to "repeating the same point" or "ignoring evidence". Put simply it is "where someone attempts to force their point of view through a very high number of comments, such as contradicting every viewpoint that is different from their own". I've politely asked you to desist. Please give other editors airtime. TarnishedPathtalk 03:12, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The comment you're replying to was just asking for a clarification. If this is bludgeoning at all, it's minor compared to other instances. Regardless of merit, repeated accusations of bludgeoning don't seem constructive. — xDanielx T/C\R 17:07, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Repeated opposition to every No !vote isn't constructive either. Selfstudier (talk) 17:11, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Yeah, you’re probably right. I will disengage from the discussion for the time being Amayorov (talk) 17:24, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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  1. Yes. Benny Morris is the most referenced historian in this article. Some have complained that he is 'oversourced'. This might be true, but the main issue is WP:CHERRYPICKING. Currently, large sections of his research are omitted, seemingly due to them not fitting a particular view, while the rest forms the bulk of the article. Finer points are sometimes overblown. This is a clear violation of WP:DUE:

    Neutrality requires that mainspace articles and pages fairly represent all significant viewpoints that have been published by reliable sources, in proportion to the prominence of each viewpoint in those sources.

    Another common argument against the paragraph's inclusion I've seen is that it "engages in Nakba denial". That is simply not a historical argument, especially given that most articles about the Nakba rely on Morris already. (see Wikipedia:What FRINGE is not). Of course, any historian who disagrees with Morris' assessment should be included too. Amayorov (talk) 20:31, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  2. Probably. I'm not totally clear on the context leading to this RfC, but NPOV generally means representing all non-fringe views on a matter, so purported evacuation orders should certainly be mentioned when covering Haifa. We don't necessarily have to quote Morris, but his work is more prominent and moderate than most of the alternatives we might consider, such as Karsh's [2]. — xDanielx T/C\R 21:00, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  3. Yes. Morris is one of the foremost experts. As far as I can see no RS have been provided that contradict his account. The circumstances of the flight of one of the largest urban communities of Palestinians is clearly relevant and should be included in the article. Alaexis¿question? 16:10, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Were they expelled? "Khalidi and Morris agree that 70,000 refugees in the first wave fled, and that about 250,000 were expelled in the final stages of war. However, this accounts only for half of the refugee population. The dispute between the two is about the 350,000 or so who exited Palestine in between March and June 1948. While Morris thinks this half has left by its own accord, Khalidi argues it was expelled as well (a particular acute argument has being going on about the refugees of Haifa - around 65,000 in number). Zionist historiography cited Haifa as an example for a Jewish effort to persuade Arabs to stay - Morris, in this case, accepts the official version. Khalidi does not - he describes, as does more elaborately Nur Masalha, the means by which the Haifa population was driven out. Haifa was evicted in the wake of plan D, as were the Palestinian population of the mixed towns of Jaffa, Safad and Tiberias" Selfstudier (talk) 16:18, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree that, if the RfC paragraph is to be included, Khalidi's PoV should be added too. I would also consider Karsh (some people describe him as "fringe", with which I disagree). Amayorov (talk) 17:31, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    So we should add Khalidi/Masalha's accounts. Why is it an argument not to include Morris' viewpoint? Alaexis¿question? 21:27, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Isn't that a larger issue than AHC "orders"? Khalidi might sneer at him a bit, In his more recent odyssey to the right..., but i don't see him actually countering the specific argument. Anyway in response to Alaexis, we should accurately summarize Morris if used which the suggested content does not. fiveby(zero) 16:37, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    It is, but it seems to me that the debate over Haifa is being pursued only to unduly emphasize the apparent fact of of Arab orders while ignoring the surrounding context and what exactly happened in the run up to the British departure. Selfstudier (talk) 16:54, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't see how the surrounding context is ignored, because it currently forms the bulk of the article, and would continue to do so after the addition. My point is that a significant part of the debate is omitted entirely. Amayorov (talk) 17:29, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  4. Probably. At the very least, some attributed description seems merited. I generally err on the side of inclusion when it comes to this as long as we aren't dealing with FRINGE. "We already rely too much on this prominent historian," sounds like cherrypicking to me. And Levivich's "don't source a scholar unless they've been cited by another scholar" rule would result in a lot of removals across many articles if that were actually followed. Andre🚐 10:32, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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"Historian Benny Morris asserts that the initial order to evacuate came from local Arab leadership, and that the Arab Higher Committee endorsed it post factum. Among the evidence he cites are British and American intelligence reports, and an assessment by the High Commissioner of Palestine. According to Morris, possible reasons included clearing the way for Transjordan's impending entry into the war and avoiding the population being used as hostages" cited to Morris 2004 pp195-200
which is the same as the RFC subject matter except that "as well as statements by the Haifa Arab Emergency Committee on 22 April 1948" has been added. Selfstudier (talk) 09:04, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The initial discussion took place here: Talk:1948_Palestinian_expulsion_and_flight#Haifa. Different opinions were voiced, so it would presumably be better to canvass more viewpoints and discuss them with more structure.
The edit over at Battle of Haifa (1948)#The battle wasn't disputed. Amayorov (talk) 12:32, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment. The argument "this article relies too much on Morris" has no basis in Wikipedia policies. If there are other accounts that contradict Morris, they should be presented and an argument based on WP:WEIGHT should be made. Alaexis¿question? 16:49, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Alaexis, I think of you as an experienced regular in this topic area. Do you really need to say "if"? :-) Cuz I think you already know the answer to whether or not Morris is contradicted by other accounts.

    Can all of us regulars in this topic area please stop pretending like we don't all know that Morris is widely cited for his facts (dates, places) and widely disputed for his characterizations/interpretations? Levivich (talk) 16:55, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    "Morris is widely cited for his facts (dates, places) and widely disputed for his characterizations/interpretations."
    This is correct. See Avi Shlaim for example: "There are two Benny Morrises," he says. "There is the first-rate archival historian whose work is of utmost importance in understanding the Israeli-Arab conflict. And there is the third-rate political analyst who has little understanding of what is driving the modern conflict."[3] IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 20:15, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I'm sorry but I'm not sure I understand. There is one factual statement attributed to Morris Morris asserts that the initial order to evacuate came from local Arab leadership, and that the Arab Higher Committee endorsed it post factum and one "interpretation", also attributed (According to Morris, possible reasons included clearing the way for Transjordan's impending entry into the war and avoiding the population being used as hostages).
    If either of these is contradicted by other accounts, we should add those accounts to the article. It's not an argument to remove his viewpoint. Alaexis¿question? 21:25, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Again, you say "if" as if it's a possibility, when I think you know it's a certainty. You know that his account is in fact contradicted by other accounts, correct? You know this for a certainty because we've all discussed Morris many times before at many pages. Right? So why do you say "if"?
    You also speak as if "all viewpoints should be included" when I think you know that's not what NPOV says. Because his accounts are contradicted by others, and that's a very good reason not to include it. That's what NPOV says. Levivich (talk) 14:13, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Speculation about Alaexis' knowledge or motivations isn't relevant here.
    NPOV tells us to represent all significant viewpoints. Are you claiming this viewpoint is insignificant? There are several other historians who make similar assertions, though Morris is probably the most prominent and moderate of them. — xDanielx T/C\R 14:33, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Quote that sentence from NPOV in full and you'll answer your own question. Levivich (talk) 14:36, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    All encyclopedic content on Wikipediamust be written from a neutral point of view (NPOV), which means representing fairly, proportionately, and, as far as possible, without editorial bias, all the significant viewsthat have been published by reliable sources on a topic.
    What is it you have an issue with? That quoting Morris on the causes would be disproportionate (despite the fact that Khalidi’s POV is already included)? That Morris isn’t a reliable source? Amayorov (talk) 21:43, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    It would be simpler if you articulate your point directly. Are you getting at in proportion to the prominence of each viewpoint in those sources? That's about the extent of coverage given to each viewpoint, not about whether they're covered at all. — xDanielx T/C\R 21:45, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Can you answer directly which sources contradict the two assertions I mentioned in my previous comment? Alaexis¿question? 19:26, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    For the first assertion:
    AHC orders Khalidi, Walid (2005). "Why did the Palestinians Leave, Revisited" (PDF). Journal of Palestine Studies. 34 (2).
    local level Khalidi, Walid (2008). "The Fall of Haifa, Revisited" (PDF). Journal of Palestine Studies. 37 (3).
    Both earlier articles republished in response to these points in The Birth of the Palestinian Refugee Problem Revisited (see editors note in 2005 article). Morris does not make the second assertion, so no need to look for a source which contradicts. fiveby(zero) 20:04, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Morris doesn’t make the second assertion himself (i.e. doesn’t aggregate), but quotes it as a possible reason verbatim.
    Regarding the first point, Khalidi doesn’t refute Morris’ evidence (intelligence and military reports and assessments by British top-officials). He studies a different type of primary evidence (radio broadcasts and newspaper clippings), and doesn’t find corroboration of Morris’ conclusions there.
    [EDIT: TBF Khalidi also claims that there was a collusion between the Yishuv and the British, which might cast some light on Morris’ evidence.]
    Now, Khalidi’s work should be included (in fact, it already is). But I cannot for the life of me understand why Morris’ research can’t be either, unless you consider the debate essentially settled. This is also some heavy WP:OR. Amayorov (talk) 21:41, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Sure, after you directly answer my question. Levivich (talk) 20:11, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    You are defining the problem, that only Morris is being considered and that does have a basis in PAG, NPOV. Selfstudier (talk) 16:56, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Shouldn't that be amended by adding other sources alongside Morris? That Morris' work is currently cherry-picked is a different problem. Both problems can be fixed together. Amayorov (talk) 17:41, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    You say that Morris work is cherrypicked but that is only the case if Morris is disputed besides Haifa, is it? Selfstudier (talk) 17:44, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Sorry, I'm not following. Yes, Morris' work on the flight from Haifa is currently cherry-picked and the parts to which he dedicates much (most?) attention are omitted. Amayorov (talk) 18:14, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    What I was asking is whether the other citations to Morris besides Haifa are also disputed. Selfstudier (talk) 18:22, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Plenty. For example, Morris's assertion that [in Dec 1947 - March 1948] an extremely small, almost insignificant number of the refugees during this early period left because of Haganah or IZL or LHI expulsion orders or forceful 'advice' is disputed by Pappé. More often, his disputed claims are included alongside others (e.g. his count of the abandoned Palestinian localities). IMO this is what should be done with this RfC too. Amayorov (talk) 18:50, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Why do we write 'comment' in bold in a discussion section? I'm 100% sure I've read multiple sources make the statement that Haifa is well known as "the exception that proves the rule," the one time Zionists tried to get Palestinians to stay put. But now I can't remember where I read it, and it's a hard thing to search for. I think maybe I've posted some sources about this in a previous discussion about Haifa, but I can't remember where or if that happened. Anyway, anybody remember either any sources or previous discussion? I think maybe we can replace Morris's attributed views on this with something in Wikivoice sourced to multiple sources. Levivich (talk) 17:05, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes, an aggregation of the research by Morris, Khalidi, Nur Masalha, and Karsh would be good. Can you write a proposal? Amayorov (talk) 17:32, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I'm curious under what objective test does Karsh belong in that group of names? E.g., what is Karsh's most widely-cited work, and when was it written? Levivich (talk) 17:51, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Specifically regarding Haifa, Nakbat Haifa (2001) was discussed and referenced by other historians in this list, as well as more recent publications (e.g. this). The archival evidence he provides in it was later incorporated (independently or not) into Morris' 2004 new edition of his book. He's a professor at KCL and is respected enough to have held positions at top American universities, which published his books. Yes, his more recent works are criticised by many, but generated much discussion. I wouldn't consider him at the same level of respectability as Morris though. Amayorov (talk) 18:09, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    There are hundreds of university professors who have published in this field and whose work has been cited by other scholars. Your list of four are 3 of the best-known scholars in the field...and Karsh. Look at this list:
    One of these is not like the others... Levivich (talk) 18:22, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    To be a little more fair to Karsh, his 2014 book The Arab-Israeli Conflict: the Palestine War 1948 has 83 GS cites... still nothing compared to the others' books about this subject. Levivich (talk) 18:27, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Nakbat Haifa (2001) is an article, rather than a book, so of course it received fewer citations. A better comparison would be with something like Islamic Imperialism: A History: 384 GS. Much of the book discusses the Arab-Israeli conflict.
    Specifically regarding the Battle of Haifa of 1948, Karsh's and Morris's articles are among the top on GS. Amayorov (talk) 18:35, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Karsh is WP:FRINGE and doesn't belong in this article anywhere except in the histroriography section. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 20:27, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Can you provide evidence? AFAIK his work is widely cited, his books are published by reputable journals and publishing houses (Harvard UP, Yale UP), he's a professor at one of England's best universities (KCL) and has taught at Harvard and Sorbonne. Amayorov (talk) 20:38, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    See Efraim Karsh#Reception, this review of a Karsh work, and this review. Also in Benny Morris' words: "Karsh resembles nothing so much as those Holocaust-denying historians who ignore all evidence and common sense in order to press an ideological point. One can only assume that, like them, his modest "contribution" to the Israeli historiographic debate will soon vanish."[1] IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 21:12, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't think a number of negative reviews are sufficient to override WP:MAINSTREAM.
    Do you consider Ilan Pappé to be fringe too, because his work received similarly harsh criticism, such as this, this? I personally would not. In Benny Morris' words, Pappé's "at best...one of the world's sloppiest historians; at worst, one of the most dishonest", or that "he believes that there is no such thing as historical truth." Amayorov (talk) 21:25, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    You complain about others "cherrypicking" Morris. Yet here you are seemingly selectively ignoring his criticism/denouncement of Karsh. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 21:30, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    My point isn't that Morris should be the only voice we should consider. Other voices, who criticise Morris and who are in turn criticised him, should be covered too (as long as they're reputable). My concern is that the coverage of all of them should be neutral and not cherry-picked.
    In this particular instance, I believe Morris' denunciation of Karsh should be described at length in Karsh's bio, as it is now :) Amayorov (talk) 21:35, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Levivich:, looking for on-wiki discussion i'd think someone would have quoted Pappe for this: Interestingly, this city is singled out by mainstream Israeli historians and the revisionist historian Benny Morris as an example of genuine Zionist goodwill towards the local population. The reality was very different by the end of 1947. but can't find that anywhere. Should we look for where Morris and others have singled out Haifa for use? fiveby(zero) 17:38, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes--I think it would be helpful to gather some "best sources" for this to look at besides Morris and, as you suggest, summarize in wikivoice what the sources agree on. Levivich (talk) 20:14, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • I can see the criticism of why it is risky to overrely too much on one scholar but is it not helpful that it is attributed to the scholar so readers can understand that it is just a singular perspective? I have not formed an opinion on this RFC yet but am trying to be of assistence. Jorahm (talk) 17:17, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Morris, B. (1998). Refabricating 1948 [Review of Fabricating Israeli History: The “New Historians.,” by E. Karsh]. Journal of Palestine Studies, 27(2), 81–95. https://doi.org/10.2307/2538286

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change:

Scholars widely describe the event as ethnic cleansing, although some disagree.

to:

some Scholars describe the event as ethnic cleansing, although some disagree.


All encyclopedic content on Wikipedia must be written from a neutral point of view (NPOV), which means representing fairly, proportionately, and, as far as possible, without editorial bias, all the significant views that have been published by reliable sources on a topic. 109.64.55.154 (talk) 09:57, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done. Please obtain consensus for your requested edit. TarnishedPathtalk 10:05, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]